decandantzombie (decandantzombie) wrote in digital_tears,
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poetry time

I heard the beating of my heart
Heavy, Loud
Like a sledge hammer
Resounding through the halls
Reverberating off every corner
Like a slowing clock that winds down to the end
It was the sound of my demise

Bam
Bang
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slam
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slam
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then... silence
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For some reason this made me think of a crow bar. But I liked it.
I was at work and depressed (as is usual with me) and I heard this noise like some slamming something against the walls. It might have been a crow bar. of course considering it's "my demise" a crow bar is pretty gruesome way to go. I think you may have inspired another spill of words.
As in a good spill or you hate me for it?
All spills are good. and I'm an equal oppurtunity hater, you don't have to do anything special to gain that kinda love from me.;p
Well that's good to know, glad I could help the writing process. :D Lemme see the finished spill.